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Updated: 06/11/09 11:29 PM 9 comments | Log in to comment! | Share this!Verse One:
Frozen deep under water
in lake full of traitors
i remember you face
in spite this forsaken place
The way i hurt you
The way you cried
The way i sat there
As you said goodbye
Chorus:
Forgiveness cannot be found
In a place deep underground
Frozen under hardening ice
In place where there is no light
But all you see
Is the one who fell
He flaps his wings
In the ninth circle of hell.....
I really can think of a follow up verse or a bridge. Can NG help me?
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